My Darling? “My dear, my darling, You are all I’ll ever need!” The bottle smiled back. ~ Spread haiku love:TwitterFacebookMoreTelegramWhatsAppGoogleTumblrRedditEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related 9 thoughts on “My Darling?” Add yours Beautiful.. Be it happiness or sorrow… It stays with you… 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thanks! Your reply is just as beautiful 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person That’s the miracle of your write-ups 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person I’m blushed and don’t know what to say to that… Thanks, I guess :-0 Doing my best here 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person You may not be aware, but in some reader views, only the first two lines of the poem are visible. The third line is only revealed once the poem is clicked. The question mark in the title gave a hint at a twist and the first two lines were enough to draw a person in. The effect, in some sense, was twistedly humorous (although mixed with seriousness). In a poetic sense, the twist hit appropriately. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Wow! Thank you for such an insightful comment! I fully appreciate it! At last, someone pointed it out that 2 lines Reader thingie. In the early days of this blog, I was thinking whether I should go with writing haiku in one line (separating 7 5 syllables with “~”) or with writing haiku neatly in 3 lines. As it turned out, the latter approach didn’t befriend Reader that much. However, funnily enough, when skimming Reader, all my haiku show ankle to readers (in the form of the first two lines). They click and, yes, the third line twist hits. Can’t be found in all my haiku, though, but it’s a good thing to keep in mind, the first two lines, that is. Once again, fully appreciate your comment! I’m glad you enjoyed the haiku with its twist 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Nice one 👍 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Yes! Quite tricky 🙂 you’re expecting to read something about a pretty girl, but you got that :-0 LikeLiked by 1 person Yeah I got it absolutely 😄 LikeLiked by 1 person Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.