Forgive me! “Listen, I swear, it Will never happen again.” “Look! Not good enough.” ~ Spread haiku love:TwitterFacebookMoreTelegramWhatsAppGoogleTumblrRedditEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related 10 thoughts on “Forgive me!” Add yours Life can get harsh … 😦 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply True true… Look, not good enough. Look! Not good enough. Probably they’re in the middle of something? Caught in the act? She’s looking at something abs and says it’s not good enough? 🙂 punctuation makes all the difference here, or at least it should. LikeLiked by 1 person You are superb! Skill me … I am interested. LikeLiked by 1 person I’m flattered by your comment. How does one “skill you” though? 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person The way you got skilled may be… 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Wow! I don’t think I’m that skilled but it’s nice to know that you hold such an opinion of my writing abilities. It’s just plain haiku… I don’t know. Talk about broad questions… I’ll reply to your this very question tomorrow as I’ll be in the mood to continue writing up my “About” section. The answer I’ll give you will directly go “as is” into “About” page. Two birds with one stone 🙂 LikeLike Lovely! LikeLiked by 1 person I tried. And tried. And tried again… First off, I apologize for not writing anything here yesterday, although promised to. Now, the skill bit. I don’t believe my scribbles are any special. Just some 17 syllables haiku and nothing more. I read your poetry and I can see that you think differently than I do. And I like yours better than mine. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I think in pictures / clips… I mean, I don’t think in words, it’s hard to do in both Rusian and English. Generally for haiku I would have a flash picture of something out of blue, sometimes prompted by simply reading something. I’ll have the gist of what I want to convey. Then I flesh it out: Family drama, funny situations, some phylosophical observations, the natural occurrences, etc. I guess it works pretty much the same with minor alterations for virtually all authors. Ok, I start talking out of my duff now! 🙂 better stop writing the answer. If nothing else, it’s my honest answer 🙂 Hope you’re having a good day LikeLike Hey Ilya !! Dude…thanks a tonne for your appreciation… But you know what? Your short..simple yet effective haiku skills inspire me a lot…you approach of framing haiku’s reflects how we perceive our lives on a daily basis. Thanks buddy! Keep inspiring :-* much love 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person So much praise, it makes me blush 🙂 Thank you for your generously kind words, Sumi! I’ll keep inspiring to the best of my ability then 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.